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"The Black Thorne" Acrylic on paper & digital A personal piece for Brandon Sanderson's Oathbringer.

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  1. Cerino
    Cerino on August 1, 2018 at 4:12 pm

    Hi! Awesome peace.
    The one thing I would change is the blue reflections on the jaw and chin. The fact that there is local color makes it pou up too much, and takes awaay the efect of the blue light coming out of the suit.
    And maybe darken the eywe

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    • JacobASweet
      JacobASweet on August 3, 2018 at 7:25 pm

      Thanks Cerino! I’ll try those suggestions out. Thanks for taking the time. ;D

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  2. AlSirois
    AlSirois on August 7, 2018 at 3:55 pm

    I’m sitting at another table, but hey — if this thing allows us to critique other tables, so be it! Anyway, I disagree with Cerino’s remark about the reflected blue light. To me, that’s part of what this piece work. It reminds me of some of Kelly Freas’s work. Good composition and layout, and the little splash of red above the guy’s head really adds to the overall effect.

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  3. AlSirois
    AlSirois on August 7, 2018 at 3:55 pm

    I’m sitting at another table, but hey — if this thing allows us to critique other tables, so be it! Anyway, I disagree with Cerino’s remark about the reflected blue light. To me, that’s part of what makes this piece work. It reminds me of some of Kelly Freas’s work. Good composition and layout, and the little splash of red above the guy’s head really adds to the overall effect.

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" a light in the darkness" 12"x16" oil on board A piece done for the Watts Atelier, Magic the gathering bootcamp.

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"A puggy problem" 20"x20" Acrylic on board A personal piece.

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JacobASweet

Jacob Sweet

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An aspiring Illustrator and Visual Development artist.

http://www.jacob-a-sweet.com

I am open to critique
I WOULD LIKE HELP WITH

Any info would be useful, since I know my eyes are not as fresh towards my content as yours surely are.

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