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EASEL OF Pierluigi Abbondanza

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  1. RachelPerciphone
    RachelPerciphone on November 9, 2018 at 11:35 am

    Hi! Could you please explain what “PF” means?

    Without knowing what the story is about and what the purpose of the illustration is, my feedback is a bit limited. I think the color palette is nice and I like the way you have painted the face. The piece is pretty clearly divided between a light space and a dark space and my eye doesn’t really know where to go around the piece after I view her face. I like how you have a shadow or branch or something breaking up the light space a bit along with some abstract value & texture variations. There seems to be something else being depicted, though I’m not sure what it is (is she against a tree? Is that foliage or snow on the right?). So my feedback is to clarify the surroundings and flesh out other story-telling elements some more.

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    • RachelPerciphone
      RachelPerciphone on November 9, 2018 at 11:36 am

      Oh, I just realized “pf” was probably just a typo. 😛

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pierluigiabbondanza

Pierluigi Abbondanza

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Freelance illustrator and photographer

http://www.abboart.com

I am open to critique
I WOULD LIKE HELP WITH

Hi everyone, this is a painting I created for a story that I have written. Would like to hear any kind pf critique about it to see if there's something that need to be fixed. Thank you.

https://www.instagram.com/pitturadigitale/

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