EASEL OF Pierluigi Abbondanza
I am open to critique
I WOULD LIKE HELP WITH
Hi everyone, this is a painting I created for a story that I have written. Would like to hear any kind pf critique about it to see if there's something that need to be fixed. Thank you.
Hi! Could you please explain what “PF” means?
Without knowing what the story is about and what the purpose of the illustration is, my feedback is a bit limited. I think the color palette is nice and I like the way you have painted the face. The piece is pretty clearly divided between a light space and a dark space and my eye doesn’t really know where to go around the piece after I view her face. I like how you have a shadow or branch or something breaking up the light space a bit along with some abstract value & texture variations. There seems to be something else being depicted, though I’m not sure what it is (is she against a tree? Is that foliage or snow on the right?). So my feedback is to clarify the surroundings and flesh out other story-telling elements some more.
Oh, I just realized “pf” was probably just a typo. 😛