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Europa

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  1. mpMann
    mpMann on August 4, 2018 at 11:49 am

    Everything in this seems to be of similar scale and detail, so it all just sort of feels like its lined up in a row. Simply varying the size and locations of the three men would be enough to give greater depth of field and a more interesting composition.

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Mars

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  1. AdrianNagorski
    AdrianNagorski on August 2, 2018 at 5:11 am

    nice, like the sphinx
    is that a rider on the left? some one riding the prey mantis? I would alter the pose so its more side on and visible
    and maybe leave it in silhouette form? kind of pulls all my attention to this instead of the middle of the page
    the dragon flies in the background scale needs to become smaller due to distance
    i like it
    you have quite a lot of empty far far background space on the left , maybe duplicate the right pyramids in that space except a lot smaller?

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Venus

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Walter Louis

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It's for a Sci Fi project in Moebius' Style. Heavily inspired by Frank Herbert and Philip K. Dick

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